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Dumbledore's Army 
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Post Dumbledore's Army
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4315906/1/Dumbledores_Army_and_the_Year_of_Darkness
250k word epic focusing on Neville and the second Trio's adventures at Hogwarts.

Begining: much better than the original: so many tear-jerking scenes.

Middle: sags just like the original. So many deaths showing the Pain of War. Compassion fatigue.

Finale: much better than the original.
Neville also gets a ghostly cheerleading squad, but in this fic, Neville's sacrifice means something.
DD's evil Plan is acknowledged as evil.

Original: people really die off-screen and the focus is on Harry's fake death.
Fic: people die on screen, which hints at the cheapness of Harry's "sacfrifice".


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